Monday, 27 November 2017

The enormous fairy tale castle looked magnificent and breathtaking!

  • The enormous fairy tale castle looked magnificent with breathtaking decorations in the large  magical hall.
  • It is fancy with marvellous fairy tale characters and incredible flags on the walls.
  • The food in the fairy tale castle smells beautiful like apples growing on trees.
  • There is the burnt crispy  smell of pigs roasting on the spit.
  • There are many colourful fairies flying around the castle like birds searching for a prey.
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.

Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write five descriptive sentences to describe a fairy tale castle and record it using screencastify.


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  2. Hi Te Raiana, my name is Billy from the Summer Learning Journey. I hope to do some fantastic blogging with you this summer. I have really enjoyed your descriptive writing here, I think you have a real gift for it. I especially like your similes and that line about the pig is making me awfully hungry now!

    Thanks, speak soon. Billy