Tuesday, 16 August 2016

Duffy theatre

L.I- we are learning to write a recount using correct punctuation.
Success Criteria- I  know I can do this when I write a recount about Duffy theatre show using correct punctuation.

Yippee! today we saw a Duffy play at the hall.

I saw the actors and there names were Temata, Ruby and Duffy.

The story was about Duffy going back in time to save Ruby's dad from getting shot in war.He saved him by taking him out of the way but this time he got knocked out.

 He saved her dad so they had more money to go to school.After Duffy saved her dad he went back to 2016 and she could read.
She got smart and she knew Math and knew how to write and read.

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