tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6302975417947407745.post6429819047230409076..comments2020-06-03T11:48:32.352+12:00Comments on Te Raiana: Having a fun bike ride!Ms George Room 8http://www.blogger.com/profile/00042678116239674339noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6302975417947407745.post-827354715705025052018-02-23T13:34:25.504+13:002018-02-23T13:34:25.504+13:00Kia Ora Te Raiana, My name is Katelynn and I from ...Kia Ora Te Raiana, My name is Katelynn and I from Grey Main school, Totara.<br /><br />This is a great way to present your work! <br /><br />It sounds like you had a wonderful day with your NAN! <br /><br />Katelynn<br />Totara 2 Grey Main SchoolKatelynn https://www.blogger.com/profile/05785787905603831340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6302975417947407745.post-55850314867059877212018-02-23T13:28:21.667+13:002018-02-23T13:28:21.667+13:00Kia Ora Te Raiana, My name is Ruby I am from Totar...Kia Ora Te Raiana, My name is Ruby I am from Totara 2 in Grey Main School<br />This is a good piece of writing and it tells you everything about your bike ride. Maybe next time you could add more punctuation in your paragraphs and add some photos. But overall this is a really good blog post. <br />Kai Pai Ruby https://www.blogger.com/profile/17910741719736256328noreply@blogger.com